Monday, 6 September 2021

My persuasive Writing

This is my 2cd blog post about the 2cd task and it was writing our success criteria was to structure. We had our learn create share to do for my learn bit I had to structure a piece of persuasive writing and then I was up to my create bit and that was to Start My Persuasive Writing my share bit was to reflect on my learning and write a quality blog post. I found it tricky to write persuasive Writing. I found it easy to write about cats and dogs. My digital learning objects shows that I can Embed my doc on my blog. Next time I would write why Dogs are better than Cats.

Have you wrote a  persuasive Writing? Did you write why cats are better than Dogs or why are Dogs better than Cats? Tell in the comments!

Here's my 

WALHT structure our writing 

Success Criteria Self Assessment 
I will write my introduction (What I think, and a preview of what my writing will be about)
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I will use my plan to explain each of my arguments and reasons why I think that (research)
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I will end with a conclusion where I reiterate what I think. 
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I think that Cats are better than Dogs in many different ways. In this persuasive text I will tell you three reasons why cats are better than Dogs.


Firstly Cats are  softer, sweeter, and smarter but Dogs actually love training because they love having tasks and being part of a pack. Cats are hardwired to stalk, hunt, and pounce on their prey, which makes them perfect for keeping your home free of unwanted pests.

Secondly Cats are definitely not evil, mean, or vindictive by nature. Dogs help to manage and protect other animals, preventing them from running away.

Lastly Cats sometimes likes you but it is nice having a cat or a kitten. But Dogs Bark at you and chase you.


For all of these reasons above I believe that Cats are way better than Dogs.

3 comments:

  1. Mālō e lelei Aimie,
    This is a great piece of persuasive writing that you have self-assessed.
    Maybe you could have highlighted the success criteria table the same colour as what you highlighted in your writing so we could see the match.
    Try and make sure that your examples match your opening statement.
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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    1. Mālō e lelei Mrs Naden
      Thank you for commenting on my blog
      I will highlight it and update my blog.
      Sorry I didn’t make sure that my examples didn’t match the opening statement.
      Kind regards
      Aimie

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    2. Mālō e lelei Aimie,
      No need to apologise. This is your first piece of persuasive writing this year so that is just some advice for the next time you write one.
      Mā te wā,
      Mrs Naden

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