This week I was learning to Summarise
I enjoyed finding facts
My digital learning object show that i know how to embed and take selfie
I found it challenging to write in red and yellow background
Next time I would change fonts,facts,colour and background
Hi Aimie! It's Camille.
ReplyDeleteI think you did quite decently with summarising facts and puting them on you're Chinese New Year poster!
Maybe next time you could change the font and color for the red background so other people who see it could see it better, this is just a recommendation so you don't have to follow what I say!
Again, I think you did great on you're blog post, even though there is some room for you to improve!
-Camille
Thank you camillie
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Aedan from St Mary’s School.
I really like how you split your poster in half to display your facts cleanly.
I learnt that chinese new year falls on the 12 this year.
Maybe you could change your last fact because it lasts for 15 days not 16.
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Aedan
Thank you Aedan
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Aimie
Kia Ora Aimie! I'm Kylah from saint marys school!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you made it pop and it caught my eye! looks like the same happened with Aedan and Camille! I like how you named each animal but it was a bit hard to read because the red in the writing blended with the background. maybe you could change it so it would be easier to read it. I think you did great at this and you did an awesome job!
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Kylah