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Dear Aimie, Thank you for sharing your writing. I am glad that isolation easter was not that bad. You were lucky to get treats. I like the way you have used some great adjectives and verbs at the beginning of your story. Maybe you could go back and highlight your verbs and adjectives. ma te wa Mrs Aperahama
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Dear Aimie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing. I am glad that isolation easter was not that bad. You were lucky to get treats. I like the way you have used some great adjectives and verbs at the beginning of your story. Maybe you could go back and highlight your verbs and adjectives.
ma te wa
Mrs Aperahama